~~“CIRCLE ‘O LIFE”~~

Slips, touches the edges
Running, finding the end
Where am I?
I run all around
Above and underneath the ground
Searching, Screening
Finding the here about
Run run run, they shout
I am here, all over again
In pain, insane
I need a resting corner
It is a serious concern
I need not hold my shadow
Faith in HIM I bestow
Survival is what I need
Little of rest and some peace
But my feet don’t seem to stop
Never ending is the road of life
Where am I?
Still hunting the treasured end
The eternal satisfaction
I have ran all around
Yet no where is my soul to be found
Where am I?
Above or underneath the ground?
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October 23rd, 2007 at 9:42 pm
Captivating reading, in such powerful emotions - you have a deep understanding within poetry.
Intrigued throughout a poem worthy of the highest praise.
October 25th, 2007 at 9:01 am
Your words are really supportive. its rare that i get even a feed back of the english portry i write. Thank you so much. It is my pleasure to have written somthing worthy of praises.