~~ First kiss ~
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In the cinema hall
As the lights dimmed to darkness
He gave me his hand
I let him hold mine
He took it close to his face
Touching my fingers to his skin
Then I felt his warm breath
He kissed my hand
I felt his arm around my shoulders
Drifting me closer
He touched my face
I lost my mind
As his fingers ran over my lips
He bent forward n kissed my cheek
I closed my eyes
I wanted more
I was motionless
I must confess
He is the one who has ever touched me
He is the one I could never resist
I opened my eyes
I saw him smile
I too smiled
He came down to kiss my lips
I melted like candy flakes
For a moment I knew nothing
Then I lost my breath
I pushed him a little
Not loosing his kiss
I needed air
It was not a long one
It felt it was not fair
Before I realized
His lips were on me again
Pulling them softly
His mouth was all over mine
I rolled my tongue
As I felt his around
His moved his lips
Got a better grip
Sweetly went on
I was all cold
It was hard to believe
He was there loving me
I held his head
Touching his face
Wishing the moment lasted for eternity
I gave up
I gave in
I did loose control
The tender touch
His firm hold
He knew the trick
He chanted the spell
Bewitched me well
How else could have I
Let all happen so easily
He was still kissing me
I could feel nothing
But the warmth of mouth
Wetness all around
Liquidizing deep inside
Slow movement inside out
I could hold him hug him tight
He let me go
I moved back
Looked at the big screen
Could understand nothing
What the fockers did
I smiled
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April 5th, 2007 at 5:57 pm
bahot khoooob tosha ji…..
April 16th, 2007 at 11:37 am
best one
April 16th, 2007 at 8:44 pm
Very beautiful
April 18th, 2007 at 10:59 am
Thanx Buddies..!!
It was the best one
May 7th, 2007 at 8:57 am
it was the coolest poetry i’ve ever read;)
May 7th, 2007 at 2:47 pm
Thanx Kanwal … and this is the coolest comment i ever got
May 9th, 2007 at 12:51 am
Hi Tosha
Its a wonderful effort and it came out so naturally, as if it’s everyone’s own story or experience. The best poetries, shud come out and touch everyone, naturally.
Keep Up The Gud Work
Take Care!
-Ramit
May 9th, 2007 at 3:06 pm
Thank a lot Ramit … ur words are encouraging. Poetry has to be pure. And purity comes straight from heart.
Will catch up with u soon.
May 9th, 2007 at 7:16 pm
coolest hot !
May 10th, 2007 at 2:08 pm
Emotions and sensuality with pourity…..good work keep it up
May 24th, 2007 at 2:38 pm
just lovely… to good
June 1st, 2007 at 12:00 pm
lovely and best
June 1st, 2007 at 1:57 pm
Thanx a lot Ankur, Izhar, Sohail and Atena … an appreciation can mean so much … it brings a smile on the face .. it motivates … it brings faith in your ownself … Thanx a lot friends for liking my work.
June 11th, 2007 at 5:15 pm
it’s so beutiful:(i want kiss too:)
June 25th, 2007 at 8:24 am
WOW!
haahh hah!
it’s…..it’s….just.. i can’t even control my breath!.
thanks!
i like it
June 29th, 2007 at 7:21 pm
awesome
July 4th, 2007 at 8:15 am
Thanx a lot tete
and Lean!!
Siraj!! well its al about loosing ones breath.
Thanx a lot
July 9th, 2007 at 9:51 am
wow!!! that was touching……. i feel so goood after reading this!!! oooh godd!!! great!!
July 17th, 2007 at 8:32 pm
Thanx Shiu!
I feel so good after reading wt u have said
July 28th, 2007 at 3:48 pm
Very sweety first kiss.My 1st kiss was similar.
July 29th, 2007 at 6:56 pm
Its such a Precious and Pious moment … to be treasured like KOHINOOR!!
Thanx a lot ANI!!
August 6th, 2007 at 12:53 am
i search beauty photo by google
it so nice shot
thx u ^^
August 14th, 2007 at 6:52 pm
It’s really great,your’re welcome
August 14th, 2007 at 6:56 pm
I love kiss
it’s really most beautiful
I have it.I am lucky
it’s necessary for every one
September 4th, 2007 at 9:41 pm
Dear DREAM … so is the first kiss … like a dream a fantasy … Thank you.
Dear Danny … yeh its lucky to have one that is so amazing that it is worth remembering all ur life time … that is true LOVE.
Thank you.
October 5th, 2007 at 3:12 pm
I am wating for my first kiss!!!
i want it to be so sipecial !!
October 13th, 2007 at 6:44 pm
It was very romantic.It made me remember my first kiss with “MY LITTLE BABY”.Now that i have read this poem i feel that i’m falling more n more in love with “PITUSUN TIME”….But he is not with me any more……
October 17th, 2007 at 4:47 pm
Carman!!
First kiss ia very special … my wishes r wt u!!
October 17th, 2007 at 4:51 pm
sweety!!
like is tough sometimes but … precious moments are like gems … kapt safe in the heart forever!
October 19th, 2007 at 6:30 pm
it was wonderful tosha
the poem means a lot…
my girl would sure like it.. i will make her read….:)
October 19th, 2007 at 8:00 pm
Thanx a lot Vikram!!
wish you all the luck with ur girl … my best wishes for you two.
i hope this poem is an inspiration for you guys.
CHeers!!
October 21st, 2007 at 8:37 pm
very intimate. lovely
October 21st, 2007 at 8:43 pm
and very precious too … thanx a lot
January 19th, 2008 at 9:20 am
Very nice, just outstanding and very heart touching, as though its all happening.
January 23rd, 2008 at 9:46 am
Well Tabrez … It all did happen :D!! thanks for your appreciation!!
June 18th, 2008 at 6:58 pm
top at list…hehehehe sexy thinkig
June 23rd, 2008 at 7:06 am
Tosha,
A wonderful poem. It coincides with my own story.
- Ramit Azad
June 23rd, 2008 at 11:57 am
Something like this can come out of one’s own experience only!
Well done!
June 23rd, 2008 at 2:16 pm
Thanx friends for liking my poem!!
June 27th, 2008 at 11:00 am
Dear Ramit Azad !!
This a true story too :D!! Its good to know the poem has to incidences to link to.
October 3rd, 2008 at 11:31 am
……………………may be true ………….but like a poem………………………….wonder…..& sexy poem.
October 20th, 2008 at 1:31 pm
hiiiiiiii. very good shayaries for good$Ħå₥₥Ῐ:
चिलमन में आग लगी,
है कोई मुझे पानी देदे
गुलिस्ता झुलाज़ रहा है,
कोई मुझे दो पल की रवानी देदे
गगन चुंबति यह लपते
भसम कर देंगी मुझे
दिल मैं दफ़न है कई राज़
कोई इस तन्हा दिल तो पनहा देदे
दिल की आच में तो मैं
पहेले से ही झुलाज़ रही हूँ
कोरी सदी सुखी है साँसे
कोई मेरे ज़िंदगी को एक कहानी देदे
**** s
November 1st, 2008 at 10:39 am
hey really tosha its a gr88..moment!!!thanx for shairing
November 13th, 2008 at 6:14 pm
very beautiful expression