Jee le yah Zindgi

बदला तेरे सितम का तुझसे क्या ले
तेरे साथ गुम के दो घूट हम भी ले ले
दर्द सीने मे होता है साखी
इस दर्द के दवा तू हमसे ले ले
देख दूर उस किनारे के ओर
आपना रुख़ तू कर उजाले के ओर
बेवफा मिले तो भी तू वफ़ा करले
जी ले यह जिंदगी मौत का रुख़ न ले
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badla tere sitam ka tujhse kya le
tere saath gum ke do ghoot hum bhi le le
dard seene me hota hai sakhi
is dard ke dawa tu hamse le le
dekh door us kinare ke ore
aapna rukh tu kar ujale ke ore
bewafa mile to bhi tu wafa karle
je le yah jindgi mauth ka rukh na le
***
The poem is inspirational. Sending the message to the broken hearted to not feel let down. There is no gain without pain and one must not complain for the pain they get. Hopes and dreams must be kept alive and the destination can be achieved.
Para 1: The poetess says, what am I to gain from avenging you. With you I’ll share your sorrows and suffer all pain you give me. I understand there are wounds deep in your heart, but my friendship and love will heal it all.
Para 2: Lo! The destination is not very far. With hopes in your heart move to the direction of your destination. Even if you come across those who betray you, you give love and be good to everyone. Live the life as it comes, don’t let the circumstances depress you and let you down.
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April 9th, 2008 at 11:22 am
lafzon ki talaash mein,
nikley toh ho tum.
chalnaa zaraa dekh ke,
ho na jaana rukh-e-hawaoon mein gum.
likhna, jo kahey dill saccha hai,
pakney do,
koi khayaal abhi kaccha hai.
April 9th, 2008 at 11:44 am
हर काली कच्ची
पाक के फूल बन जाती है
ख़यालात हो जो सच्ची
माहेकते रंग लाती है
***
Har kali kachhi
Pak ke phool ban jati hai
Khayalat ho jo sachhi
Mahekte rang lati hai
April 9th, 2008 at 11:57 am
rangon se rangna kaagaz apney,
tasveer koi ban jayegi.
khayaalaat jo mehkeingey tumharey,
bas bandagee ho jaegi.
Kudaa koi kaheen milega tumko,
tumhee mein duniyaa ho jayegi.
April 9th, 2008 at 12:23 pm
खुदाई तो दिल मे होती है
पराई यह दुनिया होती है
दिल से दिल के मेल हो तो
खुदा की बरकत होती है
****
Khudai to dil me hoti hai
Parayi yeh duniya hoti hai
Dil se dil ke mel ho to
Khuda ki barkat hoti hai
April 9th, 2008 at 12:27 pm
aadaab….!
bahut khoob.
accha likteen hain aap….
tasveerein bhi subhan alaah…!!!
aapse milkar accha laga…..
April 9th, 2008 at 12:32 pm
Hamme bhi bahut achha laga
Koi shayari hi shayari main jawab de to bahut accha lagta hai.
Thanx !!
April 9th, 2008 at 12:36 pm
chaliye toh phir…..
yoon hi guftagoo ka silsila chalatey rehna,
bandey ko khudee se yoon hi milatey rehan.
alaah karey karam ho iitney tujhpar,
bas yoon hi lafzon ko shaayare banatey rehna.
April 9th, 2008 at 12:43 pm
Dua mile nek ki
Haatho se kare karm achhe
Dil me mohabbat
Aakhon main khuvyaish
Rah main sanam mile sachhe
April 10th, 2008 at 6:20 am
do musafiron (read casper and tosha) ko rah mein
youn milte dekha
baton hi baton mein
ek doosre mein ghulte dekha
socha beech mein na bolein
yahi sahi aur accha hoga
par tham na sake jazbaat,
jab apne andar ke shayar ko machalte dekha !!
April 10th, 2008 at 7:58 am
भावनाओ को थमने ना दो
ख़यालो को मचलने दो
जो भड़क उठे ज़िगर मे शेर
शायर को तड़पने ना दो
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bhavnao ko thamne na do
khayalo ko machalne do
jo bhadak uthe zigar me sher
shayar ko tadapne na do
Thanx DD
April 10th, 2008 at 8:32 am
main shayar to nahi ~~
magar ek kavi ~~
jab bhi padhata
hoon main kavita teri rachi
lagata hai ki mujhko bhi shayari aa gayi ~~
a bad copy of that sweet song
April 10th, 2008 at 8:51 am
Well … !!
yeh sher nahi to kya tere zasbat hai
tu shayar nahi, to hui kaise yeh mulakat hai
kahni thi jo baat tumne dil se kahi hai
kavati na sahi tumne kai kadi (story) rachi hai
***
यह शेर नही तो क्या तेरे ज़सबत है
तू शायर नही, तो हुई कैसे यह मुलाकात है
कहनी थी जो बात तुमने दील से कही है
कवती ना सही तुमने कई कड़ी (स्टोरी) रची है
April 12th, 2008 at 11:24 am
बदला तेरे सितम का तुझसे क्या ले
तेरे साथ गुम के दो घूट हम भी ले ले
दर्द सीने मे होता है साखी
इस दर्द के दवा तू हमसे ले ले
‘WAH BHUT KHUB, U HAVE A GREAT SENSE OF WRITING WORDS IN A BEAUTIFUL MANNER”
“DARD KE SATH JIYEN HAI HUM,
DARD KE SATH RHEN HAI HUM,
TUJKO AGER KAHEN DARD NA MILE,
TO AA……………………………………,
OR ISS DARD KA PTTA HUMSE LE LEY…..”
April 15th, 2008 at 10:30 pm
Thanx
Aap ne bhi bahut khoob kaha hai!!