~मैं मनचली~
This one has been written in 2004… I still remember I bunked my class to come online and surf YoIndia.com and I was so happy that day…
.I had to describe myself and this is what came to my mind … I’m a lover and a friend!!
Na main aashik
Na main Diwani
Bas hun main begani
Hun main manchali
Hun main ek pari
Lakhon mere deewane
Idhar bhi, udhar bhi
Likhe maine afsane
Bol do bol pyaar ke
Bani main dilo ke rani
Har waqth, fitrat
Hun main mast
Bas itne si meri kahani
Mile jo raaha me
Saath rahi use bana lun
Main hun nahi
Kisi ki ifraat me
Sukh dukh ka to
Choli daman ka saath hai
Wah! zamane ki kiya baat hai
Main mann mauji
Main ek afsana
Zamane se main
Aur mujhse zamana|
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April 6th, 2008 at 1:04 pm
!! is andaaz se likha
tumne apna afsaana
lakhoon ki bheed mein badh gaya
tumhara ek aur deewana
manchaliyan to bahut dekheen
nahi tumsa koi tarana
isi mauz mein jeeti raho
ki dekhta rahe zamama !!
!! Nice free flowing expressions !!
April 6th, 2008 at 1:29 pm
I forgot to mention that this way of writing in both Hindi and English seems to be great. But y not keep Hindi posts in hindi only ?
April 6th, 2008 at 1:54 pm
Tnq tnq
he he he!!
Zamane se hum nahi … hum se hai zamana
April 6th, 2008 at 2:06 pm
Deepesh … u mean … i must keep Hindi in one blog and English in one … or you mean … i must use only Hindi font and not write roman…????
if u’ll be clear i’ll try to mend my way
April 8th, 2008 at 4:36 am
btw, if you have not realized, DD and Deepesh are the same person
and what I meant was, in case you are writing anything in hindi, use hindi fonts and if you are writing any thing in english, use roman.
Hope to see your comments at my place soon.
!! njoy !!
April 8th, 2008 at 12:07 pm
I wish that you could also translate the hindi poem for us.
cos now we can read it. But cannot understand it. (my knowledge of hindi is very limited)
April 8th, 2008 at 12:16 pm
Aaah!!
Not a bad idea …
… i’ll do it. though I’m bad @ putting sentences together … this is why I prefer expressing myself in phrases and a collection on phrases becomes a poem
… I’ll surely try my best to write a abstract for this one.
April 8th, 2008 at 12:55 pm
Explanation:
Na main aashik
Na main Diwani
Bas hun main begani
Hun main manchali
The poetess (me
) says she’s not a lover, nor has she yet fallen in love enough to become crazy for someone. Describing her mood she says, she is carefree and follows her heart … just like a lover.
Hun main ek pari
Lakhon mere deewane
Idhar bhi, udhar bhi
Likhe maine afsane
The poetess calls herself a fairy. She means she’s delicate and pure. Simple yet mysterious like any fairy. There are many who like her ways and love her. Yet she’s not sure of what she wants and is wandering here and there. Making her mark and writing stories where ever she goes.
Bol do bol pyaar ke
Bani main dilo ke rani
Har waqth, fitrat
Hun main mast
The poetess says, all it takes is few words of love and friendship and you can win anyone’s heart. She has won many hearts just with a few talks of love and care. She goes on and says she cares not much for destiny and believes in enjoying her every moment.
Bas itne si meri kahani
Mile jo raaha me
Saath rahi use bana lun
Main hun nahi
Kisi ki ifraat me
The poetess says, this is the story of her of her life. She befriends anyone who comes to her. She is longing for no one.
Sukh dukh ka to
Choli daman ka saath hai
Wah! zamane ki kiya baat hai
The poetess then expresses her feelings about life, she believes happiness and joy, pain and sorrow and sides for a coin. Life is a roller coaster and we must except it.
Main mann mauji
Main ek afsana
Zamane se main
Aur mujhse zamana|
The poetess calls herself the princess of her desires, doing all her heart tells her. She calls herself a joyful story. Story written by herself for the world to abide with, as she is someone who believes in making trends and not following others.
April 15th, 2008 at 11:50 pm
ना मैं आशिक
ना मैं दीवानी
बस हूँ मैं बेगानी
हूँ मैं मनचली
हूँ मैं एक पारी
लाखों मेरे दीवाने
इधर भी, उधर भी
लिखे मैने अफ़साने
बोल दो बोल प्यार के
बनी मैं दिलो के रानी
हर वक़्त, फ़ितरत
हूँ मैं मस्त
बस इतने सी मेरी कहानी
मिले जो राहा मे
साथ रही उसे बना लूँ
मैं हूँ नही
किसी की इफ़रात मे
सुख दुख का तो
चोली दामन का साथ है
वा! ज़माने की किया बात है
मैं मंन मौजी
मैं एक अफ़साना
ज़माने से मैं
और मुझसे ज़माना|
May 5th, 2008 at 3:40 pm
yaar ye saari dunia k gadhon ko shayeri pe sawar hone ki kya zarooratt pad gayi hai. koi un se haath jod k request karo na k wo shayeri ka peechha chhod k kahin aur sir maaren.
aur shayeri nahin chod sakte to kam az kam das saal tak shayeri padhen phir maidan men aayen. yahan to ek toofan macha hai. jis ko dekho wohi sir uthaye chala aa raha hai.
May 5th, 2008 at 6:19 pm
lol!! Zeenam … !
aap ke zahen main koi khauf hai kya? ya koi pareshani.
Dil se nikla mohabbat ka har lafz apne me ik nazam hota hai …
kaun kahata hai ki sirf mote mote lafz likhne se hi shayari banti hai.
zis kisi ke dil main koi raaz hai.. wo shayari likh sakta hai. !!
khamiya kam dekha karo … zindgi khud b khud suhavni lagegi.
dil se likha dil se padhi … har pankti shayari lagegi…!!
November 12th, 2008 at 10:11 am
mote mote lafz likhne se hi shayari banti hai.
zis kisi ke dil main koi raaz hai.. wo shayari likh sakta hai. !!
khamiya kam dekha karo … zindgi khud b khud suhavni lagegi.
dil se likha dil se padhi … har pankti shayari lagegi…!!